Homework- Feedback from our movie.

When in the process of editing our movie, our first feedback was given. This was in the form of random people who came to say hi and ended up watching the movie. Mostly this form of feedback was about position of clips and timing of music. When we heard this we actually classed it as response from our target audience as teenagers were our TA.

The rest of our feedback came from the class after showing our film. These two points were portrayed many times; Different camera shots and focus on the main context. I agree completely with both points. To combat the first we could have had close ups of his hand openiong doors etc. To combat the second we could add extra dialogue and more examples of 180 degrees rule.

In my opinion i believe we spent far too long on the build up, if we took a few sections out of this we could focus more on the dialogue scene and use the specifications more.

However personally i think for the time we had, and for our first media project it was Brilliant :)